Monday, February 20, 2006

Clouded Vision, Courtesy Examinations

As long as you are there to hold my hand,
I'll keep falling.

As long as you are there to wipe my tears,
I'll keep crying

As long as you can read my face,
I'll keep living.

This world has not given much,
A lot of pain, many a heartfelt sigh.

My comfort is gentle touch,
My heart's speaking, this ain't a lie.

I wasn't scared of the intense dark,
Life's ugly face did not bother me.

But my fate left such a deep mark,
That I was blinded, I just couldn't see.

I gasped for breath, my vision was clouded,
Without you, like death-toll every noise sounded.

I don't regret now I've forgotten every map,
I have surrendered I have lost.

You win dear fate, win over me,
And I as a gentle dove, sleep in a friend's lap........

Ah, and of course,
the wind is blowing,
my soul is flowing.....

6 Comments:

At Mon Feb 20, 06:16:00 pm, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Great poem ma chere, keep churning 'em out

 
At Tue Feb 21, 04:08:00 am, Anonymous Anonymous said...

nice one buddy

 
At Tue Feb 21, 06:02:00 am, Blogger Sunny said...

First things first...

Thanks for the last two lines. They gave me the satisfaction of saying that I atleast understood a couple of lines in the first reading. ;)

After a dozen more attempts, I finally realized that what you need now is what I would anyways have written as my initial comment: "Tempo se!"

 
At Tue Feb 21, 07:39:00 am, Blogger Baffling said...

@ the other one
please reveal yourself, this isn't funny.....and how come you know french, are you from my school?

@surya
thanx chum

@sunny
aji pata nahi kahan se tempo aa gaya yeh sab likhne ka, agar itna dimag xam mein lagaya hota toyeh kambakth frustness hi na hoti

 
At Tue Feb 21, 10:17:00 am, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey Suv!!!

Trust me I didnt know you are so great at writing.

Lots of Love
Juhi.

 
At Tue Feb 21, 09:06:00 pm, Blogger Dewdrop said...

As long as you are there to write these blogs
I'll keep commenting [:P]

 

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