A kindled heart's burning ode
Oh Enchantress,
say what hidden fire,
draws in me such heart's desire?
What rapture thrills my feelings slow,
what passion sets my face aglow.
Your remembrances inspire in me,
this beautiful, blissful ecstacy.
Such close intimacy of our souls
has fulfilled a yearning fantasy.
With eyes shut and the lyre playing,
my hands feel your hair flowing.....
With the hands swooning to your voice faintly
your lips brush mine ever so lightly.
But when these eyes open to reality,
I see the fort,
the fortress of separation rising aloft mightly.
It takes fortitude to take on this fort,
but with paper as my shield and pen as my sword,
your name in my heart,
your knight in his shining armor ventures forth.
Break these walls I eventually will,
but to you I promise,
I won't rest until....
say what hidden fire,
draws in me such heart's desire?
What rapture thrills my feelings slow,
what passion sets my face aglow.
Your remembrances inspire in me,
this beautiful, blissful ecstacy.
Such close intimacy of our souls
has fulfilled a yearning fantasy.
With eyes shut and the lyre playing,
my hands feel your hair flowing.....
With the hands swooning to your voice faintly
your lips brush mine ever so lightly.
But when these eyes open to reality,
I see the fort,
the fortress of separation rising aloft mightly.
It takes fortitude to take on this fort,
but with paper as my shield and pen as my sword,
your name in my heart,
your knight in his shining armor ventures forth.
Break these walls I eventually will,
but to you I promise,
I won't rest until....


11 Comments:
Pretty cool Baffling! Hope this blog is here to stay...
And yeah... keep the flame burning :)
Hmm...
Welcome to the club!
"writerji" ????
since,three sa members have already
commented ,it's almost an obligation for me to do so as well
gud job,keep 'em coming
may u demolish the mighty fort and get ur princess.Amen!
Yeah, finally blogging...
Have been thinking about it for a long time, though this piece was written some time back.
Gill your comment was pleasantly unexpected, to say the least.
Let the flame buuurrrrrn....
Man.... I never knew that I had quite a poet-in-the-making sharing the floor with me for almost a year!! If you really feel that way, then you are in for a bonus.. that's for sure !!
what's up with all this sento stuff dude? Ofcourse blogs can be used for anything... but please get a life and stop all your ravings and rantings ... from all I know you already are through the ZONE
Hey Suvrat,
Really Great Stuff!!!
Hope you continue writing similar and better stuff in future as well.
Best Wishes.
Love
Juhi.
nice one.. hopefully u'll come up with somethin better though..
soon...
very very soon...
wait, wan't that grammatically incorrect??
This was partly romantic and otherwise a classical heroic effort of the "Andromedian" Prince. And i was confused about u being some kinda modern kalidas when i was going thru it.
Pen mein dum to hota hai par aajkal media mein jyaada dum hai :-).
I must say that u do possess some baffling talents and live up ur name.
And yeah their are no fortresses these days .. they are all replaced by sky scrapers.
Beautiful words.
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